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What's more important: the health of our children or how many field trips they embark on? The money for selling healthier food is a better use than using the extra profits of junk food to take a school trip. By banning junk food and switching to healthy choices in vending machines, schools could take a part in encouraging and enforcing health and wellness. By making healthier food more accessible, it will be consumed more because it's easier to reach. Obesity is an ongoing problem, and schools can help reduce the risk. Even though less money is profited, more children will benefit because of healthy choices. The government should take a part in banning junk food and creating an easy gateway to nutritious options.
What's more important: the health of our children or how many field trips they embark on? The money for selling healthier food is a better use than using the extra profits of junk food to take a school trip. By banning junk food and switching to healthy choices in vending machines, schools could take a part in encouraging and enforcing health and wellness. By making healthier food more accessible, it will be consumed more because it's easier to reach. Obesity is an ongoing problem, and schools can help reduce the risk. Even though less money is profited, more children will benefit because of healthy choices. The government should take a part in banning junk food and creating an easy gateway to nutritious options.
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One girl ends up in legal trouble, the other killed herself. It doesn't seem right for so many lives to be deteriorated by bullying. Parents and teachers should raise and correct children to be kind to one another. Bullying shouldn't be an issue involving legal discipline. Parents should be in charge of raising their children on how to treat others, not police. Most people don't purposely make somebody kill themselves, or be the one and only cause of it. Suicide is a tragedy, however, it can be prevented if the correct steps are taken. Parents and teachers should attain the authority to punish bullying.
One girl ends up in legal trouble, the other killed herself. It doesn't seem right for so many lives to be deteriorated by bullying. Parents and teachers should raise and correct children to be kind to one another. Bullying shouldn't be an issue involving legal discipline. Parents should be in charge of raising their children on how to treat others, not police. Most people don't purposely make somebody kill themselves, or be the one and only cause of it. Suicide is a tragedy, however, it can be prevented if the correct steps are taken. Parents and teachers should attain the authority to punish bullying.
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The risk may be worth it for the few people who can afford it and have the desire to do so. Alike to many adventurous stunts, there is of course a downside and the possibility of death in traveling to space. In the near future, scientists will make it possible to take a short trip to space for ordinary people, however, it comes with a cost. If someone wants to go to space for a once in a lifetime experience then why should they be stopped anymore than someone who could fly to a different country still holding the potential for danger. It’s a personal decision for those who could actually fly in to space and experience zero gravity and seeing earth’s glow. The people rich enough to go in to space have a lot of authority and when they see the beautiful earth and get inspired they can spread awareness to keep earth healthy. Taking a vacation to space is an amazing adventure that should be accepted and celebrated.
The risk may be worth it for the few people who can afford it and have the desire to do so. Alike to many adventurous stunts, there is of course a downside and the possibility of death in traveling to space. In the near future, scientists will make it possible to take a short trip to space for ordinary people, however, it comes with a cost. If someone wants to go to space for a once in a lifetime experience then why should they be stopped anymore than someone who could fly to a different country still holding the potential for danger. It’s a personal decision for those who could actually fly in to space and experience zero gravity and seeing earth’s glow. The people rich enough to go in to space have a lot of authority and when they see the beautiful earth and get inspired they can spread awareness to keep earth healthy. Taking a vacation to space is an amazing adventure that should be accepted and celebrated.